Category:Character creation

I am new to this and am a little confused on how to do this. Please correct my errors!))

Name: Vash Animal: Weasel Discription: He has brown eyes and wears a dark-red vest and dirty white shorts. He is thin and a little tall, with dark brown fur and a tan underbelly. He uses a knife and is good at both throwing it and close combat fights. History: Vash was born in Mossflower. He didn't know his parents and raised himself on the street. He grew up surrounded by criminals and became one himself. He is a thief and isn't polite. He doesn't have friends, but he might meet someone eventually.